[FEEDBACK REQUEST] Personality Development -> Habits Niche / Online Course Sales Page

I'd love your feedback on my sales letter and also a mark from 1 to 5 on how good it is (5 - you wouldn't change a thing).
Target: 30-49, wanting to develop lasting habits, they quite their habits to soon and want a system that reminds them what to do
Traffic source: own list
Offer: online course for $47
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing

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